55 Fiction -1

This is my very 1st attempt at 55 fiction. I hope that it comes out bearable and ok if not good. I am so used to writing lengthy posts that this feels kinda weird. As I said, this is my 1st attempt so constructive criticism is welcome.

New Journey

Relief floods over my body,

Finally this is all over.                                                                                                                              

No more tears, pain, hurt and yelling.

I am going to move on and embark on a new journey.

My heart seems to take the cue and relaxes.

I smile and then I am gone.

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  1. First one??!! Beautiful! one of the best 55-ers I have ever read!! It's a 'Wow!'!!

  2. I quite liked the choice of words,I think they conveyed a sense of resignation pretty beautifully…

  3. This one is really really brilliant.

  4. blunt edges Reply to blunt

    pretty cool 4 a first timer 😀

    wish all new beginnings were this easy!

  5. for the first attempt..really a nice work.. !! 🙂

  6. Amazing! Could picture everything….Loved this one. 🙂

  7. it is simply wow..really a nice one..

  8. beautiful one Harini… 🙂 🙂

    write more of these.. 🙂 🙂

  9. nicely done! if only it all could just be whisked away!…until that last line…poof! brilliant

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